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Wednesday 28 February 2018

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  1. Unknown2 March 2018 at 10:14

    Hi Eddy,
    You left it at a cliffhanger that was awesome. You made me picture it in my head. Next time write little more.

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  2. Miss Birtch4 March 2018 at 17:53

    Hi Eddy,
    Please don't forget to include an appropriate title and introduction to your writing so we know what you are sharing! Is this your alternate ending? I agree with Sameer, I liked the cliffhanger and would be interested in reading what comes next!
    - Miss Birtch

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