Orientation:
intro:It was a normal day making my daily clickbait videos I mean my good content videos, I love my videos
and my how i’m good at fortnite.
physical setting:I heard there were magical beans located at the south of England UK, I was determined to
get these magical beans. I heard if you got the beans your body will turn into a clickbaiter.
Characters: I heard there was an ugly giant, Sameer and the grant prize a hairy golden chicken for myself
ali a, the chicken will be the ultimate clickbait.
Hook to the problem: once I climbed the the beanstalk I heard something dangerous, it sounded so
dangerous that it was clickbait worthy... |
Problem: There is a big ugly giant, the face on the giant was horrifying I had to make a clickbait video.
The giant said these exact words, “FE FI FOU FUM I SMELL A CLICKBAIT ON MY DRUM” |
Kumasta Eddy!
ReplyDeleteGood job getting your Orientation and the start of your problem up. I like the way you are choosing to change up your fairytale.
I wonder if for your next post you can go back and edit out your prompts such as "Intro" "Setting" etc. This way your story will read like a book. It's a great way to organize your ideas, but by removing those bits your writing will be even better.
I am interested to see what happens next!
- Miss Birtch