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Friday, 27 July 2018

Reading

Reading alternate ending
Me and Benny started enrolling into different school and started seeing new friends.
Are new friends were really fun to have but, I miss Benny playing with me and I wish
that I hadn't been the rescuer so Benny doesn’t push me off again.
One day I went to the place where he pushed me off and I saw him we talked for a
little but, since then I we have not seen each other.
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  1. Anonymous27 July 2018 at 12:01

    Hi Eddy

    Well done on finishing your reading work this week. I like how your story ends back where it began, a the jetty with Benny and the narrator. That really brings the story full circle.

    To help improve your work give another read and make sure you have all of your punctuation in the right spots.

    - Miss Birtch

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